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Love Poem for Lilith and Mya

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methodman

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Big ballin' is my hobby
So much so they think I'm down with the Illuminati
My watch do illuminate
My pockets are naughty
But I'm God body, ya'll better ask somebody
I was born a God
I made myself a king
Which means I downgraded to a human being
You was born a Goddess
I made you my queen
Which means we upgraded to Louis the thirteen

I'm like oh Kimosabe
Your body is my hobby
We're freakin'
This ain't cheatin' as long as we tell nobody
Tell your girls you're leaving
I'll meet you in the lobby and I'll bring alislamiyya
I'm so freaky yeah and I need that Lilith and Mya
 
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Not bad Methodman, I like poetry too. Here is one from me. :)

A sonnet of seduction

I've been seduced and Lilified
and fallen to her voodeedo
but I'm not distracted by the shiny things
I told her all I need is you

With soft restraints she tied me up
Skilled knots and an evil grin
her tickle trunk already set up
the pleasure and tease about to begin

Taking care with my nipples
she knows me so well
with the softest of touches
I fall under her spell

She kisses my body
with feathery lips
singing soft melodies
my heartbeat it skips

Her eyes never leave me
as she delights in my squirm
such a skilled mistress
caring but firm

I beg for her favour
to grant me the taste
that yet I still savor
I plead her to haste

Like drinking Dom Perignon
the first time and wanting more
her nectar sweet and full
so close to her very core

And still she teases
as she plays on my tongue
doing as she pleases
until she is done

And just when I wonder
If that's all to be played
she still plans to plunder
as I am convienently splayed

She readies her toys
and lubes my backdoor
starting with a finger
until I'm prepared for more

The first is too big
but she grants my wish
a smaller one please
with vibrations of bliss

Then onto my cock
the sensations won't stop
I'm hard as a rock
and she glides up on top

My hands are freed
and I rise to her bosom
with rythym and greed
until she does cum

She holds me tight
hearts beating in sync
but such is my plight
as she gives me a wink

Finally she whispers
and sets me free
it's your turn now
I want you to fuck me

I take her cue
and she follows my lead
to a glorious finish
sated of all our need

Lying together
what more can be said
with cuddles and giggles
we snuggled in bed

Lilith is amazing
so sexy and sweet
I can never get enough
She is my perfect treat
 
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jdtipper said:
Nicely done my friend...

But might I suggest...

As my hands are freed
I rise to her chest
Overcome with a need
To kiss and caress
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Yeah, that is good too, but I wanted to work in the orgasm part....I gotta make myself look good too ya know. ;)
 
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jdtipper said:
With a shiver and spasm
She takes me all in
I sense an orgasm
Is soon to begin

:)
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Yes, thanks again.

Why don't you just change a few more things and call it your own....methodman does. :rolleyes:

It might not be perfect but I like it the way I wrote it, imperfections can still be beautiful....you and methodman could both learn that. :)

sorry JD....we 'arteests' can be a sensitive bunch. :rolleyes: :eek:
 
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Kendra_Chase said:
You just ripped off Jay-Z's lyrics. lol Good song tho....
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thank you for that catch Ms. Kendra. As I don't listen to such as that, I would have had no idea. Shame on you method.

As for the rest of this, let's not infight merlito's. I absolutely LOVED HB's poem, it described an experience I can or should be able to relate to. I seldom award away an agenda...but I can confidently say that with Freyja, Miss X, or Lilith....I would be DELIGHTED to do so. Those are some competent people. They are probably scared at night and wonder if they should put the one block in front of the other...but, that's just being human. The nice thing about a board such as this....you get to read how they respond to shit....and then, you fall in love. I am in love. Mostly with myself and, trust me, that's a bad bet. But it's the best bet I've got.

hugs,

eddie.
 
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Love you eddie and HB. For being real.

edmontonsubbie said:
thank you for that catch Ms. Kendra. As I don't listen to such as that, I would have had no idea. Shame on you method.

As for the rest of this, let's not infight merlito's. I absolutely LOVED HB's poem, it described an experience I can or should be able to relate to. I seldom award away an agenda...but I can confidently say that with Freyja, Miss X, or Lilith....I would be DELIGHTED to do so. Those are some competent people. They are probably scared at night and wonder if they should put the one block in front of the other...but, that's just being human. The nice thing about a board such as this....you get to read how they respond to shit....and then, you fall in love. I am in love. Mostly with myself and, trust me, that's a bad bet. But it's the best bet I've got.

hugs,

eddie.
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Loved your poem, HB. But geez, what is it with this board? Everybody's a critic. Or an editor!:confused:

I've never had the privilege of seeing the infamous Ms. Lilith.

Your poem however is "inspirational".

Just might inspire me to give in to that ruthless "Ruiner of Men.";)
 
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