The well written ad?

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@BellaRoseXo recently posted about the art of a good review. So what about the art of a well written ad?

I’ve found you can tell the difference between a pro and amateur by ignoring the pictures and just reading the ad. The ladies on perb have much better ads than say leolist. So many feel copy and pasted with a few changes.

For me it’s paint me a picture of who you are. What makes her different, unique and special. What type experience awaits me. Be original, be genuine, be thoughtful, be yourself. Why choose you? Gorgeous pictures are the cover of the magazine. Sure they make me have a look but it’s the articles inside that draws me to want to keep reading. I hate wasting time asking endless questions so some details on service, restrictions, rates is appreciated. Spelling mistakes and poor grammar a big nope not worth my time. Childish sayings like “throat goat, cum play, princess, cutie with a booty, party friendly, some kind of queen, good service is not cheap and cheap service is not good” and so on and I’m turning the page, grabbing another magazine.

What prerequisites of a well written ad do others look for?

 

[westwoody]

“Throat goat, pawg, daddy” and the like are magnets for a very specific market.
Strings of emojis attract guys who can’t read and only look at pictures.
A more refined approach will attract a more sophisticated audience, while not appealing to the knuckledraggers at all.
One man’s (trailer) trash is another’s beef Wellington.

 

[Bang4thebuck]

I can't pack my pork into a woman who is barely literate. Any reference to drug use, being party friendly, available 24/7, is also a red flag. I like my women intelligent, clean, and classy.