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    Post The art in writing a review......

    The reviews can be just facts. The reviews can be pieces of art too.

    During my time on PERB, I had seen quite a few fantastic and creative writers. Just to name a few from old days..... would be Sanityclause with his unbelievable skill of writing stories going for weeks. Another one would be of course Little Alex. His pen was light and quick. You read his stories like a chapter in a book, rather then a review.
    The last that comes to mind is my friend ( we met on PERB almost 15 years ago and we still meet every week for coffee to talk politics and to swap stories ) is of course Squirrel also known as Bruddha ( unfortunately moderator deleted his both accounts... just because he could or because he was jeleaous Squirrel had more fun then he could ever have )

    So who was for you, the best writer on PERB? Post example of text or link to his / her posts ( yes, in old days some of the girls post reviews of guys too ).

    Here to start.... old review of Ashley Fame written by Bruddha.


    EBONY AND IVORY

    After a long weekend of thanksgiving feasts, this Bruddha slept like a baby last night. Early this morning, without yet opening my eyes, I lay in my big white rasta bed and smiled in anticipation of what beautiful things were about to come. The rising sun pierced my window and bathed my room in sunlight. I walked to the shower and surrendered my body into the hot water thinking of the first new moments of my latest fantasy. With the room dripping with steam, I wrapped two large white cotton towels around me and searched the floor for my Winston Rodney sandals. It was at that moment, that I heard the rhythmic tapping of her 6 inch heels upon the paving stones in the garden. I slipped on my white rastafarian linens, turned on the african beat and carried a bottle of white ginger lotion to my front entrance. She knocked patiently and as I slowly opened the large wooden door what I saw in front of me, took my breath away. I could feel my cock swelling in anticipation of round two with this gemini sex goddess, because what she wore so early to my door was nothing less than amazing. Like some horny saturday-night-slut, Ashley was dressed to the nines in stunning black evening wear. Her long legs were exposed to my view between graceful curtains of black silk; her hips tightly chastised with a splendour of jewels her blond hair cast to one side to reveal her naughty schoolgirl smile and from behind her glittering porn-star sunglasses, her seductive dark eyes glanced down at my raging hard-on. This X-rated spot, marked the beginning of my morning fantasy with Ashley Fame. Oh what a beautiful new day.

    The energies of a new day can be intoxicating. Ashley grabbed my cock through my baggy linen draw string pants and led my down the gallery to my bedroom. By this time, the bed was fully immersed in sunlight and as she pulled me down on top of her sex body, I could feel the bed sheets were as warm as if they had just come out of the dryer. Without letting go of my cock she began to kiss me ever so softly and then stroke me as she pierced my lips with her wet tongue. Her mouth tasted like fresh apple pie; she ripped open my baggy white linen shirt and entered the embrace of my warm body. She slid down my pants to expose my ragging hard-on and moved under me so that my black cock hung erect between her milky white breasts from where she invited my flute closer with darting movements of her tongue. With my body stretched out above her, my linens fell over her tight body like a white tent in the arabian desert. Her black fuck-I clothing silhouetted against the white bedding and her open mouth moving slowly up and down the full length of my cock. The contrasts of ebony and ivory were stunning. Everything was black and white and bathed in brilliant sunlight and I began to lose control, fucking her mouth in anticipation of her tight wet pussy. I kneeled down between her long legs and peeled off every shining black layer of her clothing with one important exception her fuck-I black shoes. As I entered her and began to pump my way into the new day, she dug the sharp chrome extended tips of her six inch heels into the back of my legs and begged me to fuck her harder. Ashley is so horny. I swam in her sexuality deep kissing, pumping, licking, sucking, riding, flipping, fucking, drinking and then surrendering, to each of our mutual morning orgasms.

    There is nothing better than great morning sex and if you have never planned a fantasy session in the morning this Bruddha highly recommends the experience with Ashley. She is one horny little number who rocked my ebony world and now, I am flooded with gratitude. Ashley, if you read this review, please feel welcome to respond. I tend to get lost in the moment with you but would love to hear your take on things this morning with this Bruddha. I will likely have left out some memorable moments talk dirty to me.

    Bruddha
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    Squirrel created and maintained that persona so well.
    I hope he is happily stocking up his nest for winter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by vancouverman View Post
    The reviews can be just facts. The reviews can be pieces of art too.

    During my time on PERB, I had seen quite a few fantastic and creative writers. Just to name a few from old days..... would be Sanityclause with his unbelievable skill of writing stories going for weeks. Another one would be of course Little Alex. His pen was light and quick. You read his stories like a chapter in a book, rather then a review.
    The last that comes to mind is my friend ( we met on PERB almost 15 years ago and we still meet every week for coffee to talk politics and to swap stories ) is of course Squirrel also known as Bruddha ( unfortunately moderator deleted his both accounts... just because he could or because he was jeleaous Squirrel had more fun then he could ever have )

    So who was for you, the best writer on PERB? Post example of text or link to his / her posts ( yes, in old days some of the girls post reviews of guys too ).



    I haven't read all of Birdboy's submissions .
    But, the few I have, definitely demonstrated an eloquent Writing style !

    Here's one...

    https://perb.cc/vbulletin/showthread...-Riley-from-EC

    I've found, a lot of the Boys on PERB, prefer the Short & Sweet style ?

    They're not looking for a Chapter... LOL

    "Just the Facts Man !"

    Cheers


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    BJ Hunter.

    Not even close lol

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    Take8easy has given plenty of good reviews over the years.

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    Toss up between HiTrack & HatTrick

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    Quote Originally Posted by DDawGG View Post
    Toss up between HiTrack & HatTrick
    Right... HiTrack with his famous car that every street walker between low and high-track would recognize.

    Quote Originally Posted by Vulva Man View Post
    I haven't read all of Birdboy's submissions .
    But of course.... how could I forget famous Birdboy ....

    Thank you guys .....

    as for Squirrel, he is well and has lots of fun ..... Maybe one day , I will manage to drag him back here .....
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    Back when *I* was young....

    There were a lot of creative reviews. Part of the seduction and attraction of a new paramour was the writing of the gentlemen who described their encounters.

    So many fun PA meetings.

    Anyone remember getting kicked out of Muggs and Juggs because the dancers weren't making any money?

    So many great bodies, so many amazing women, so many memories.

    And some of the guys were nice too.

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