Just a little suggestion to all the reviewers or anyone else posting something.
I know that most of us are not seasoned writers but still ..... .. please break your post into paragraphs so it is easier to read. Usually five, six sentences make a decent, easy to read paragraph.
Break down your posts into different sections e.g.
1. Initial contact
2. Start of the session
3. Session itself
4. End of the session.
5. Your overall impression, ratings etc.
6. Relevant details e.g. rates, location, restrictions etc.
Some OP's posts are 30-40 lines long and honestly, I have trouble reading the review. May be it is just my aging eyes.
Just thought I should throw this out there.
T8E
Now, try reading this ....
Just a little suggestion to all the reviewers or anyone else posting something.I know that most of us are not seasoned writers but still ..... .. please break your post into paragraphs so it is easier to read. Usually five, six sentences make a decent, easy to read paragraph. Break down your posts into different sections e.g. 1. Initial contact 2. Start of the session 3. Session itself 4. End of the session. 5. Your overall impression, ratings etc. 6. Relevant details e.g. rates, location, restrictions etc. Some OP's posts are 30-40 lines long and honestly, I have trouble reading the review. May be it is just my aging eyes.Just thought I should throw this out there.T8E
PS: I am waiting for my favorite primary school teacher Ms Erica Phoenix (would love to be taken to task by her) to come join the thread.
I know that most of us are not seasoned writers but still ..... .. please break your post into paragraphs so it is easier to read. Usually five, six sentences make a decent, easy to read paragraph.
Break down your posts into different sections e.g.
1. Initial contact
2. Start of the session
3. Session itself
4. End of the session.
5. Your overall impression, ratings etc.
6. Relevant details e.g. rates, location, restrictions etc.
Some OP's posts are 30-40 lines long and honestly, I have trouble reading the review. May be it is just my aging eyes.
Just thought I should throw this out there.
T8E
Now, try reading this ....
Just a little suggestion to all the reviewers or anyone else posting something.I know that most of us are not seasoned writers but still ..... .. please break your post into paragraphs so it is easier to read. Usually five, six sentences make a decent, easy to read paragraph. Break down your posts into different sections e.g. 1. Initial contact 2. Start of the session 3. Session itself 4. End of the session. 5. Your overall impression, ratings etc. 6. Relevant details e.g. rates, location, restrictions etc. Some OP's posts are 30-40 lines long and honestly, I have trouble reading the review. May be it is just my aging eyes.Just thought I should throw this out there.T8E
PS: I am waiting for my favorite primary school teacher Ms Erica Phoenix (would love to be taken to task by her) to come join the thread.
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